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| Window | June 28, 2009 @ 11:12am |  This is a shot while walking the warren of organic side streets that make up the city of Rome.
I have this in color but the b&w simplifies the image and I love the great tonal range.
Regards,
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Last Edit: June 28, 2009 @ 12:44pm by Danny | |
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Flo

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| August 22, 2009 @ 8:25am | Beautiful tonal range. But I think, to simplify the image, I'd crop both from the top and bottom - a small amount from the top to just touch the corner of the window frame - and a larger amount from the bottom - up to the bottom of the darker stucco at the left border. Maybe you won't like it, but it's worth a try.

 Flo - PPY
"May we live in peace without weeping. May our joy outline the lives we touch without ceasing. And may our love fill the world, angel wings beating." aziza
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Sam

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| August 22, 2009 @ 2:57pm | Nice one, Danny. I can see why you stopped to take the photo. I particularly love the silvery tone of the windows. Very nice tones overall. Flo's suggested crop may simplify and add more balance, but it is a pleasure to view as is.

 (PPY) "Everything you can imagine is real", Pablo Picasso |
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Bill H.

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| August 22, 2009 @ 3:50pm | Danny - I agree with Sam that the windows seem to shine with a hint of clouds, without being blown out. Flo's suggestion might add some balance.
Bill H.

 Bill H. PPY " Do not go where the path might lead, go instead where there is no path and leave a trail." ~ Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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| August 23, 2009 @ 3:23pm | Thanks all for the comments!
Danny |
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