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Window
Started June 28, 2009 @ 11:12am by Danny
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Danny


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WindowJune 28, 2009 @ 11:12am

This is a shot while walking the warren of organic side streets that make up the city of Rome.

I have this in color but the b&w simplifies the image and I love the great tonal range.

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Danny
 

Last Edit: June 28, 2009 @ 12:44pm by Danny
Flo




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August 22, 2009 @ 8:25am
Beautiful tonal range. But I think, to simplify the image, I'd crop both from the top and bottom - a small amount from the top to just touch the corner of the window frame - and a larger amount from the bottom - up to the bottom of the darker stucco at the left border. Maybe you won't like it, but it's worth a try.


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Sam




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August 22, 2009 @ 2:57pm
Nice one, Danny. I can see why you stopped to take the photo. I particularly love the silvery tone of the windows. Very nice tones overall. Flo's suggested crop may simplify and add more balance, but it is a pleasure to view as is.


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Bill H.




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August 22, 2009 @ 3:50pm
Danny - I agree with Sam that the windows seem to shine with a hint of clouds, without being blown out. Flo's suggestion might add some balance.

Bill H.


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Danny


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August 23, 2009 @ 3:23pm
Thanks all for the comments!

Danny
 

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