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Dark Tunnel
Started June 10, 2010 @ 11:10am by Jmel
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Jmel




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Dark TunnelJune 10, 2010 @ 11:10am
Too Dark?



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Flo




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June 10, 2010 @ 8:42pm
Not too dark. But I'd like to see the focus draw me into the tunnel. Instead, it seems to force my eyes back to the entrance which is in sharp focus.


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Jmel




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June 10, 2010 @ 10:17pm

Quote (Flo)

Not too dark. But I'd like to see the focus draw me into the tunnel. Instead, it seems to force my eyes back to the entrance which is in sharp focus.

Yea Flo,
I kinda had trouble with that myself. Will try to fix it since blur is done in PS


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Mohsin




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June 12, 2010 @ 10:07am
I ll go with Flo. Moreover, I like the combination of Green and B&WSmile


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Jmel




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June 12, 2010 @ 10:38am
Ok, is this better?

Tongue


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Marty


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June 12, 2010 @ 10:56am
I think I prefer the first one, just because the figure in the lower right looks more mysterious.
 
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June 12, 2010 @ 7:08pm
Is that a figure in lower right, or is it a rock formation, lol? I can't tell. And now I think I'd like to see a little more blur on the figure side of the tunnel, but also some painting to make it look more like a figure?


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Jmel




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June 12, 2010 @ 7:34pm

Quote (Flo)

Is that a figure in lower right, or is it a rock formation, lol? I can't tell. And now I think I'd like to see a little more blur on the figure side of the tunnel, but also some painting to make it look more like a figure?

Its a rock formation. But with a little PS magic I can make it a unicorn.LOL Grin


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