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Man on a BIke
Started November 21, 2009 @ 11:10am by Barbara
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| Man on a BIke | November 21, 2009 @ 11:10am | I think this picture has too much negative space. Would appreciate any suggestions how to make this a better picture.
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| November 21, 2009 @ 2:07pm | | I like this, Barbara! If possible, a little more space to the left would be cool. If not, it works as is. Nice B&W! |
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Flo
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| November 21, 2009 @ 3:11pm | I agree with Marty. That biker doing tricks is going to need lots of negative space to catch his fall, lol!
Flo - PPY
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PunctumSaliens
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MCampbell
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| November 21, 2009 @ 8:15pm | It looks fine to me. I like it a lot.
If it were mine though I might try cutting a little off the top. Scrolling down to cut a bit off seems to bring it a bit into balance.
I think the bicycle needs the negative space to the right and below to balance its energy.
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Pixelle
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| Men on a Bike | November 22, 2009 @ 7:50pm |
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I agree. I really like it.
Micheline
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