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Trio of Seats
Started November 21, 2010 @ 2:31pm by Mark
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Trio of SeatsNovember 21, 2010 @ 2:31pm

Trio by dslshooter, on Flickr

Just the right spot for a cup of morning coffee. c/c welcome.

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November 21, 2010 @ 2:53pm
The phantom seat, lol. I do like the concept.


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November 22, 2010 @ 6:24pm
I would tell you how much I like the green juxtaposed with the red-orange brick and how the strong chair-shadow helps to complete an implied circle with the chairs, and how this image with its vibrant light is evocative of someone waiting for a morning coffee (hint... hint, and has an abstract quality about it because of the way you cropped it, but I see no coffee waiting for me. Grumble, grumble.

A couple of nitpiks: Both table legs (or perhaps they are chair legs) appear dark-black, and attract a lot of attention at the expense of the whole image, particularly the right bottom leg which is right at the edge of the frame; the second would be the shape and amount of space the table occupies. If it were positioned so that it appeared like a piece of triangle jutting into the scene or with less of it, I think the image would be more dynamic, pushing back and better balancing the strong light and bricks. Now where's that coffee?

 

Last Edit: November 22, 2010 @ 6:34pm by JMR

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